tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6631743289338271241.post4023556720512687354..comments2023-05-04T07:40:07.001-04:00Comments on states-of-mine: Magpie Tales-TreasureC.M. Jacksonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06936560662110633442noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6631743289338271241.post-42883287450056385822010-04-23T23:04:23.115-04:002010-04-23T23:04:23.115-04:00Exactly! And some time what or who wakes up, is n...Exactly! And some time what or who wakes up, is not something we want to face. Time is a precious gift...easily lost.<br /><br />I liked the cadence of this one.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6631743289338271241.post-20131383503831458382010-04-21T17:49:57.308-04:002010-04-21T17:49:57.308-04:00Time, it is a treasure, isn't it?Time, it is a treasure, isn't it?Sanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18245301334922883500noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6631743289338271241.post-72048508515770001442010-04-20T23:35:43.367-04:002010-04-20T23:35:43.367-04:00Yes, how is it that our lives are governed by the ...Yes, how is it that our lives are governed by the mechanical ticking of arbitary hands on a dial? Is it only when the clocks stop that time takes over?<br /><br />I like this poem. And my house is quiet with hubby gone. Nothing but the tick tock.Yvonne Osbornehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18212188414972694795noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6631743289338271241.post-28639565084929500522010-04-20T22:52:13.055-04:002010-04-20T22:52:13.055-04:00Hi there! I love the rhythm of your poem ... very...Hi there! I love the rhythm of your poem ... very nice ... and good to meet you too!Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6631743289338271241.post-90317479600153137012010-04-20T19:36:30.946-04:002010-04-20T19:36:30.946-04:00Oh!!!!!! I liked this!Oh!!!!!! I liked this!Suzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10329289442910294160noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6631743289338271241.post-42771554160978401422010-04-20T17:51:56.208-04:002010-04-20T17:51:56.208-04:00Like being on a train ride, which is what life is,...Like being on a train ride, which is what life is, I suppose.<br />That final 'tock' speaks volumes...Peter Gouldinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13292063172122249202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6631743289338271241.post-3759657726724089412010-04-20T13:16:25.559-04:002010-04-20T13:16:25.559-04:00The rhythms of living - sometimes we get so caught...The rhythms of living - sometimes we get so caught up in them, we miss "what is possible" and "what matters."<br /><br />Nice one, C.M.Jenniferhttp://www.jensrealia.typepad.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6631743289338271241.post-89045284973343631472010-04-20T13:08:20.388-04:002010-04-20T13:08:20.388-04:00Love the ending...tick click tick clock...tock.......Love the ending...tick click tick clock...tock....reminding us that time marches ever onward.steviewrenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14233066158555762167noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6631743289338271241.post-41123539441512413962010-04-20T12:50:34.413-04:002010-04-20T12:50:34.413-04:00Love your message.Love your message.Monkey Manhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06741294113777908130noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6631743289338271241.post-87886172879079542552010-04-20T12:32:10.233-04:002010-04-20T12:32:10.233-04:00"Something or someone
Wakes us up"
You..."Something or someone <br />Wakes us up"<br /><br />You lit a match with this one, and started something. This is good.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6631743289338271241.post-43782061700381082222010-04-20T09:56:44.952-04:002010-04-20T09:56:44.952-04:00Very nice hurrying rhythms!Very nice hurrying rhythms!Vicki Lanehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08114677510459055768noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6631743289338271241.post-18376110251560508342010-04-20T08:33:44.952-04:002010-04-20T08:33:44.952-04:00We do get quite mesmerized with all the clicking a...We do get quite mesmerized with all the clicking and ticking of time, don't we? Great piece.Tess Kincaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6631743289338271241.post-37852551936873792702010-04-20T06:17:31.376-04:002010-04-20T06:17:31.376-04:00yeah i like the rhythm of this one as well...heres...yeah i like the rhythm of this one as well...heres to hoping we all wake up soon. smiles.Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6631743289338271241.post-23135516917855837082010-04-20T02:44:39.138-04:002010-04-20T02:44:39.138-04:00i loved your work! it was a beautiful reminder to ...i loved your work! it was a beautiful reminder to me to seek out and enjoy the 'precious' in the midst of my mudane routine of daily living. thank you for that :)Sherihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16360494347587103696noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6631743289338271241.post-66449012162985901952010-04-20T01:11:08.577-04:002010-04-20T01:11:08.577-04:00This is a lovely poem. I liked its rhythms and its...This is a lovely poem. I liked its rhythms and its dry wisdom.Enchanted Oakhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14815997287116818456noreply@blogger.com