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23 February 2010

Magpie Tales-Rendezvous

Magpie  Tales 2
Vienna was where they met. A warm bar on a cold, rainy night caught them by surprise and drew them to a place neither one expected. Two weeks later, an hour away she blew out the match, waiting, her cigarette glowing and eyes on the door, hating herself for wanting and waiting for him.


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17 comments:

  1. Nice. I like that minimalist take on the two weeks in between.

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  2. Says so much in so few words! Nice one!

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  3. OMG, 3 sentences and what a story they tell. Reminds me of the Hemmingway 6 word story.
    Very nice indeed!
    rel

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  4. wonderfully done...in and out with just enough to get our brains turning...

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  5. Sumptuous, evocative - I love it, so concise, yet large with intrigue.

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  6. Never was so much said in so few words.

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  7. Spare and elegant. Love it. LOVE it!!

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  8. Love it when I am left begging for more. I haven't visited Magpie Tales yet, but I will put it on my list of places to go.

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  9. http://adivashammer.com/archives/1124/comment-page-1#comment-8521


    without fanfare...the image is told in words of natural application.

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  10. Not many stories tell so much in so few words...

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  11. hating herself for wanting and waiting for him.


    ooo la la....that is an ignition!

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  12. A romance to hot to forget...so she waits wanting more. Nice.

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  13. This is definitely a suspenseful plotline. What will happen next??

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  14. Precise, concise and to the point but very poignant. Great job.
    QMM

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  15. You said it all in so few words.

    Christine

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