Snowflakes fall quickly making the limbs of evergreens bow. Wind moves and stops, branches swaying. A burst of snow and sound, blackbirds take flight, caw, caw, leaving their hiding place to continue their daily migration. Carried by the wind, wings flapping against a cold sky, they fly; a black and white photo in broad daylight.
Can you say it in 55 words?--give it try and tell the g-man!
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I like this rendition of winter, especially the last line, 'a black and white photo in board daylight.'
My 55 is HERE
Really loved this piece. Today I saw a big hawk perched at the top of a tall tree. It looked like a black and white photo against the clouds. At first, I thought he had a broken wing as it was out. But then, as I watched, I figure out that he had gotten wet and was drying it out. Very cool.
For some reason I just now got bitterly cold. Your 55 is so descriptive...it rocks!!
My 55 "I Want No Flowers on My Grave".
[scroll below my show n tell as always]
Happy Valentine's Day Weekend!
what a beautiful picture you have painted. i like black and white and winter often takes me there. great 55.
mine is up!
Have I been missing something? A flash 55 challenge? Hmmm checking it out. I can hear those crows...a black and white photo in broad daylight. Very Nice Ms. Jackson.
CM...
A Perfect Picture!
Excellent 55 My Dear.
You are one talented Lady!
Thank you so much for this Wintry Image...You Rock Baby!!
have a Kick Ass Week-End..G-Daddy
Awesome 55!
Mine is up.
You have painted a vivid picture in my mind with only 55 words. Great job!
that is indeed a beautiful picture!
Beautifully painted prose. 55's are fun.
Hope you don't mind if I link back to you on this?
You paint such wonderful pictures with your words. i can see the birds flying and smell the snow in the air xJ
I wish I can paint pictures with words like you.
I almost like Winter by the way you see it.
HAPPY VALENTINE'S DAY!
and
GONG XI FA CAI!
(means WISHING YOU PROSPERITY! in Mandarin, Chinese)
hugs
shakira
http://justmeshakirack.blogspot.com/2010/02/flash-friday-55-need-to-go.html
http://justmeshakirack.blogspot.com/2010/02/mirrors-of-my-life-thursday-theme.html
This is a wonderful portrait of winter, so clean and crisp and peaceful.
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