lost and forgotten
I need you
to remember
when I lifted you
up
through the dirt
corn husks
gravel
flying
the sun
on your face
look at me
long gone
memories
as I wait
till you walk
past the barn
resting
on my bumper
cellphone
in your ear
earth beneath
my wheel
home
C.M. Jackson 2011
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12 comments:
nice capture of the feel of those broken down wheels that once made us fly...
More than one kind of abandonment here...
Creative take on the prompt...
Very nice ... I'm sayin' ~ one of my favorites this week!
Great personification of the vehicle.
Great take on the pix!
hitching a ride in rusted trails
Nice take on the pic... Very well done!
JJrod'z
Once memories are forgotten, what's left?
This is very nice. Very.
I love it! It was very well written.
Great line, throwing the cell phone reference in there! Nicely done!
http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/09/09/he-was-a-ford-man-2/
what a self revealing piece.
love you magpie.
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