19 March 2012

Magpie Tales-Therapy

striking face
box
slammer
slugger
hammer
allen
no words
no point
no wrench
can fix
the fact
you hurt me


C.M. Jackson 2012


This is a Magpie Tale--you can find more here!

9 comments:

Brian Miller said...

mmm yeah...some hurt are just...you know...nice flow to your words....

Kay said...

brilliant words..well done!!

Tess Kincaid said...

Spare...yet backs a wallop...

Helen said...

Gut-wrenching! Hurting someone or being hurt ... painful all the way around!

Other Mary said...

Wow, not a word wasted. Kudos, this is powerful.

Kristen Haskell said...

I completely agree packs a mighty punch, no needless words and speaks truth! Nice!

Lyn said...

Definitely, some things can never be forgotten..who hasn't felt this? Great!

Tumblewords: said...

Evocative piece!

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