voices whisper
in my dreams
some long gone
some just gone
but none forgotten
cause me to smile
and laugh
trying to catch up
on the latest news
I awake
tears running
down my cheeks
then I remember
and smile
happy
C.M. Jackson 2011
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18 comments:
remembering to smile i think honors those memories...
Touching write...I love "some long gone...some just gone"...
Your words beautifully interwoven, are true for many of us.
I too like the idea that you remember those more distant.
I enjoyed this. Those voices can be such a comfort.
You can hear them in the leaves......
:)
beautiful lines in here!
JJRod'z
What a great take on the prompt. Thank you.
Oh, what a fine write you've posted!
It's good to wake happy after a sad dream...
I liked the simple honesty and optimism in the grief
I like how spend your dreams "trying to catch up on the latest news." If only we could. My Magpie this week is A Plot Both Great and Grand.
A brave, upbeat way of dealing with the pain of loss .... remembering the happy, funny times ... very nicely done.
CM...
This was wonderful.
You need to come back to the Friday Funfest...G
Beautiful words.... seems to describe so many of my own dreams lately.
Lovely, just lovely.
Anna :o]
I have those dreams to....i consider them a sweet gift....love the beautiful thoughts in this one.
:-)
Happy memories are good friends, too.
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