is it below
or above
hard to tell
when the wall seems
too tall
to scale
the waves crashing
noise
thinking
nowhere to turn
listen
a chime sings
with the wind
feel
the rock
climb
aspens whispering
sunrise awakens
swim to shore
sand and salt
cleanses
heart beats
new beginnings
await
23 comments:
love the pics and found your words to be soothing...like a smooth surface. smiles.
I love the notion of aspens whispering.
Well done. I'm reminded now of the opening scene in the English Patient where the plane flies over the desert. Is it skin, is it parchment?
Aspens whispering? How lovely...
Cool stuff... :)
Erosion can lead to falling apart... but it can uncover things as well.
Love the economy in the piece. Less is more certainly applies here.
Very beautiful and nicely done!
like it, all looks like great fun!
Sand and salt cleanses but sting sometimes too, no?
Glorious words and images. The aspens just send me. Ours whisper too, I think we call them poplars in Michigan.
Beautiful words. Beautiful pictures.
My favorite:
"heart beats
new beginnings
await"
Thank you!
brian-just ripples in the pond...glad it brought a smile
willow-aspens are pure magic
clever pup-thanks! I love that book/movie!!
The Mistress-the color of the bark and the sound of aspens absolutely mesmerizes me..can't get enough--c
wings, skip, tom-mille grazie! c
Jeffscape--yes erosion reveals and creates a new reality--thanks!
mmm-exactly..c
ruth-thank you-aspens are magic--I've heard olive trees whisper as well;-) I will listen for poplars -c
mary anne-- thank you!
I really like "sunrise awakens" also "sand and salt cleanses". I never looked at sunrise in quite that way, and was just reading on a website about how gargling with salt water really does help clean out the infection in one's throat. I really enjoyed this TT. Sorry I am so slow getting here, but I've been sick and slowly getting over it.
God bless.
Mrsupole-thanks so much for stopping by. I hope you feel better soon. Warm salt water, restand lots of tea with honey should do the trick!! best-c
Lovely take on "surface"
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